Shattered, down to your knees,
Despaired, lost the shades of glee,
Caved into an apocalypse, hard to believe,
Winded down, feeling bereaved.
Collect your self and clear your sight,
Falling was not in your hand,
but raising back is your right,
Wean away those fears,
Wipe away the tears,
Face the world,
With grit in your eyes,
For souls cannot be rattled,
Nor can they be shattered.
Copyright ยฉ Shantanu Baruah
Ahhh!! So true!!! Lovely indeed!
So motivating! This is so needed. From time to time in the hustle bustle of life we forget this and beat ourselves up.
Amazingly written!
Wow beautiful ๐
‘Raising back is your right’. ๐
My word, this is so motivating. Absolutely magnificent.
there is nothing like failure
you grow and learn with every experience
You said it so beautifully “For souls cannot be rattled,
Nor can they be shattered.”
I think yes it’s all about that unbreakable spirit and will.
Wonderful post as always Shantanu.
“falling was not in your hands, but raising is your right” – this is superb ๐๐
Positivity. ๐๐
You were going to suggest me some means to improve my vocab ๐
The last two lines gave me shivers!
Thank you Tammy for your kind comment
Thank you so much for your kind thoughts, Roy
Thank you Aadithya
Thank you so much ๐๐ธ
Thank you so much for your kind read and words
Thank you for reading it so nicely. I appreciate your comment
Thank you so much OJ for your kind read
Yes let me mail you. ๐๐ธ
Thank you. ๐
Always ๐๐ธ
Give me few minutes. It is coming your way ๐๐ธ
Thank you dear
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This is so good. Very motivating and what we need to hear time and again. Thank you
Thank you for your kind read. ๐๐ธ
truly my pleasureโฅ๏ธ
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Always Mon plaisir! Means my pleasure in French lol
Merci beaucoup! Appreciate it Tammy.
Nicely written!
Itโs very motivating, thanksโค๏ธ
Thanks a lot for commenting. Much appreciate it
Beautiful and powerful poem. I love the line that souls cannot be shattered. -Jill
Thanks so much for your kind read
You are welcome!
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