I detested her presence,
And erased all her lingering essence,
Pushed away the reveries,
Shoved all the beautiful memories.
And after the ardent toil,
And battling with heart’s embroil,
I did a final search,
Doubting every possible lurch.
And to my dismay,
I found impressions of her name,
Casted on my mind like a permanent frame,
I tried hard to,
erase it all,
But when I failed,
I forced it to stall,
I wrapped my thoughts in a burning flame,
And from that moment,
things started to change.
Her shadow got dissolved,
And her image from my mind were finally absolved,
My mind was free from her humming sound,
And I was happy i found my newfound ground.
But when I was about to set free,
She appeared without any decree
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Ain’t easy to let go of somebody. Sigh.
Oh…oh….
Always. The yearning heart
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The heart has a mind of its own 🙂
You have no idea how much I can relate to this today. You wrote it so well Shantanu. It’s just perfect
Thank you so much Sona. I am glad you could relate, hopefully in a good way
True that 😊🌸
Wow beautiful
Thank you so much Adithya
So odd I would read something like this today, that’s what the heart can become, Confetti. You’re a wonderful writer and this, you must have read some minds all over the world, very relatable….especially today. Great job my friend, stay blessed.
Thank you and I am glad you can relate. Hopefully in a positive way. Appreciate your kindness with words
Writing heals wounded hearts and is very therapeutic. Forgiving releases us to be free of the power of hurt.
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How beautiful. Thank you for your read and comment
You are welcome! 🙏
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Its not easy to erase everything🙇♀️
True dear
“But when the soul was consumed,
The heart would always be an open confetti.”
Wow.. This line has so much depth in it. And I couldn’t agree more to each and every lines you wrote. It’s really the most difficult thing to do, to let go of someone. But when you somehow start putting an effort, they show up and all your memories hit you harder than ever.
Beautifully composed.👌👌
You got the essence so right. Thanks for your kind read 😊🌸
Thank you so much Madhusudan
My pleasure always! 😊
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Her presence was still lingering within the heart! Beautifully said!