She was,
Slowly but surely,
One step at a time,
Crawling away,
From all miseries and pain,
And from the precarious thoughts,
That put her in some entwined chain.
And now that she had escaped the cage,
She lost the past rage,
Her focus was on her new abode,
one brick at a time, cultivating hope,
Though the path was rough,
And it was not her playing trough,
But it didnโt refrain her to aspire,
For she had her world, she had her desires.
Copyright ยฉ Shantanu Baruah
She is Sameera here. So relatable.โค๏ธ You surely know how to inspire people, you are cultivating hope like wildflowers, at places I never thought it can bloom.๐ฑ
Wonderfully profound.
Reverted to being public and posted a new poem, Sir. Thank you for your kind support and concern. ๐๐
Thank you Sameerโs. I am so glad you could relate to it โค๏ธ๐ธhope will find you dear
Thank you so much
I just read. It was beautiful
๐๐, thanks for appreciating it.
Always my pleasure.
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My pleasure
the fire in her heart
lit her dark path
She knew she could do it
& move beyond her past
Shantanu May every girl get the inspiration n courage like your โsheโ
Beautiful
Thank you so much, Bhavna. Much appreciate your comment
Pleasure always. Let’s hope for the hope.โค๏ธ
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Powerful Profound
โThough the path was rough,โจAnd it was not her playing troughโ
Superlike โค๏ธ
Oh I wish I was her ๐
*amazed sigh* Is it weird that your poem inspire me to write about self-empowerment? ^^
I am so glad my friend. I look forward to reading yours
It is for you ๐๐ธ
Thank you Mahee. Appreciate the comment
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Sounds so peaceful. She escaped all her miseries and stepped into freedom. That is something everyone desires for. Me included.
Truly inspiring! ๐
Thank you for your Kind read ๐๐ธ
You’re welcome always! ๐
You’re welcome always! ๐
Thank you ๐
My pleasure ๐๐ธ
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#Respect
#Admiration
Thank you so much Jay
So inspiring๐๐ป
Thank you
So true sometimes we only have our desires and hope to cling on which drives us through our bad days
Thanks for your lovely words ๐๐ธ
Your poem was wonderful.
Thank you so much ๐๐ธ
I love this. โค๏ธ
Thank you so much ๐๐ธ