He brandished his deviant self,
wearing the carefree stance in his queer smile
and assumed her presence
to be nothing but a serendipity
He liked her transient presence,
her pleasing aura,
her powerful words,
and everything she said or chose not to spell
He adored the occasional silence she assumed laced with eagerness,
and the soulful smiles oozing from her blurry words,
the relentless tease she mischievously played interest him more
and all the ditched emotions
trickling down too often in some uncanny descend
But despite such strong truss
he chose to offer a deaf ear,
convincing his miscreant heart,
for she was a friend at last,
though she was like a soothing breeze,
and felt like a desire to keep,
he saw her like a knoll
and from a distance,
he cherished her,
but dared not to breach the line
He didnโt know,
but he was discovering her slowly one leaf at a time
and every occasion he peeled a layer
he was astounded to learn
what she nurtured within
They may call it platonic
but their eyes, words, heart, soul yearn for each other more with the passing time.
Copyright ยฉ Shantanu Baruah
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Lovely!๐
Beautiful.An emotion too well versed with my heart.Well penned as always , Shantanu
Thank you so much Megha
Thank you so much Richa
A beautiful portrait of hearts trying to resist… Nicely said!
Seems like we both have gone through similar sentiments in life.I’m sure others will relate with this.
You are prodigiously talented and every piece that you craft is a masterpiece in itself ……….. I am in awe of the beauty of your words. ๐
NIce
Good one
Thanks a lot Warren
Thanks a lot Megha
Thanks a lot Sakshi. I truly appreciate your kind words.
My pleasure
Pleasure was all mine ๐
Thank you so much
Thank you so much
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How beautiful is this and sad too.I would be glad if this is your imagination,if not then ๐ค
How beautifully it is written …. heart touching words ……. beautiful imagination.
I must say this is the best thing I read in recent times.๐ธ
This is so beautiful… ๐
The yearning, the love, the effect of someone’s presence and the chaos of what our life would have been if they were ours completely – perfectly described.๐ Beautiful emotions. And somewhere I relate with this.๐ฅ
๐ such beautiful poems these days ! Wow ๐ธ
Thank you so much Yasmin. Appreciate your kind comment
Thanks a lot Madhusudan
Thank you so much Devika. I truly appreciate your kind comment
Thank you so much Tracy
Thank you so much Sameera. I appreciate your kind words and I am glad you could relate to it
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Pleasure reading you always.โค๏ธ Keep writing
Thanks a ton Sameera
Love the last two lines. It sums it all up so nicely
Thank you so much Lorraine
You are welcome. As always
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My pleasure Sir๐๐ผ
Serendipity is one of my favorite words. Now I believe this might be one of my favorite poems of yours too ๐ Beautiful as always!
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Thank you so much Ana. Much appreciate your kind words
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This was heart touching to read.
Thank you so much Diana
Most welcome! ^.^
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I’m in Awe, speechless. WOW! I’m literally blown away by the soulfulness and love within each word. (I guess I’m not speechless after all). But, I am in Awe! ๐
Your comment make me so happy. Thanks so much for your lovely words. I so so appreciate it. Thank you dear โค๏ธโค๏ธ
The pleasure is all on this end, I assure you. Have a wonderful evening, Shantanu! Rest well. ๐
Thanks my dear friend. Sweet dreams ๐๐
Good Morning โ๏ธ, I have read this over ๐ฏ Times. I wrote a well deserved response and posted. I imagine it required your approval. Lol…. My words were daze from the tired-some busy day, but determined to respond.
This is such amazing Poem, I read it again before drifting off to sleep and saying a prayer. How brilliantly and breathtaking are your words. You captured every aspect of a growing relationship a deeper level of friendship weaved , intertwined each moment divine. It grows stronger our words, our bond, some how connecting. The Sun and Moon, Stars โจ of light, shining so bright. There no reason to second guess. We are not on a quest, but destined. His voice she only imagines. His charm shines through his words. There is a call he hears, it vague at times, yet sometimes clear. Draw near…
Yonnie ๐ธ๐
InHisCare ๐
Good morning Yonnie. Your comment just brightens my day. Such a beautiful adulation. I am so grateful for your deep read and the words that you write on my blog post. Thank you so much. I am so honored and humbled
You are very welcome! It is always a pleasure. ๐๐๐ธ
Did you get the first response? If you choose not to respond, all is well ! Blessings
I didnโt receive the first one. Let me look at my spam
No problem