Poetry

And when I Saw You

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The flowing hair,
The glowing face,
The smile floating like a blissful grace.

The meandering talks,
The shining eyes,
The insane labyrinth of some dwam in disguise.

I sat there agape,
Lost in that trice,
How I wished the moment to freeze for some more time.
The heart oscillated like it had never before,
And the world felt like there was nothing else to behold,

I do not know how to explain,
Unsure whether I should give it a name,
Some call it love and others think itโ€™s inane,

Some brand it,
Others label it,
And few might brandish the thought.

But for me, it was a trance,
a stupor,

an occult,
Hard to express in mere words.

Copyright ยฉ Shantanu Baruah

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63 thoughts on “And when I Saw You”

  14. Aww! So romantic! When will someone write like this for me and mean it? This is absolutely adorable. Love it

  24. No , don’t give me any credit. It’s your great work which earned the words from me ๐Ÿ’•

  26. I love how you say “Some call it love and others think it’s inane.” I feel like it’s really accurate. I found this excellent.

  32. Ye tu nahi ,yeh toh tera Ishq likhta hain
    Tere har lafz mein Mehboob ka chehra dikhta hain๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•

  34. I can’t help it S๐Ÿ˜„
    Whenever I read such beautiful words I respond this wayโ˜บ
    I am short of adjectives for your poems now ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ
    Beautiful,Awesome,Amazing etc etc words fall short for what you write.
    And I am so jealous of your “her”(cant blame me,I guess every girl here is๐Ÿ˜…)
    Koi toh mere liye itni sundar kavita likh do plz๐Ÿคฆโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿ˜„

  35. You are so sweet. I am also out of words to thank you. Really thank you for all the love and encouragement. On your last part I am only smiles ๐Ÿ˜Š๐ŸŒธyou have such a nice way to say everything ๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ˜Š

  36. You deserve every bit of appreciation and much more than this.Its my pleasure to read you๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿค—

  37. The feeling is mutual Yasmin. When I read your work I transpose to a different world. You are too good in Urdu shayari. Something I can only wish to write ๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ˜Š

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