Longing is such a wasted ado. Slowly but surely, it leads you to a defeatist creed. Waiting ruins, craving detest you. It arrests your mind in extraneous perturbations.
Rather be carefree and keep doing what is right. Shed off the burden, you are never tasked to carry it in the first place.
The joy of achieving something without anticipation is much sweeter than gaining anything through the rigorous wait. For in wait time does not fly, for in wait we give away the zeal to try.
So, what would you like to be? A miserable soul or someone whom others can behold.
Copyright Β© Shantanu Baruah
Surely, not a miserable soul. I am glad I am always happy π
I love this so much..
That is great to know. Stay in blithe πΈπ
Thank you so much Jay ππΈ
I am one of those who are usually a Happy Soul. Great post my friend !!
Great to know. Thanks for your comment
for in wait we give away the zeal to try…..I love this line. It’s so profound.
Thank you so much Sakshi πΈπ
For in wait time does not fly, for in wait we give away the zeal to try.
πso true!
A good reminder Shantanuπ
Our life depends on our choices and so does our peace.Nothing can affect us until we let them.To let go is definitely better than waiting for something hopelessly and make our life miserable .
Was a pleasure reading it.π
Thank you Yasmin. I am glad you agree and thank you for such beautiful comment ππΈ
You are too kind ππ
Great post . #alwayshappysoul π
Thanks a lot Nirant
Pleasure always π
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My pleasure πΌπ
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Vocabulary ππ how is it so perfect?
Ekta you are too sweet. Thank you for your kind words ππΈ
Wow, it’s ethereally soothing to read. Great write sir.
Thank you so very much Aquib. Much appreciate the kindness
My pleasure. ππ
Beautiful said !<3
Thank you for your kind words
Nicely nicely put!
Thanks a lot Warren.
This is inspiring! I would choose the option ‘two. π
Way to go πthanks a lot for commenting π
This resonated so well! A great poem. π
Thank you so much Rishu π
Welcome!
You’re welcome!
inspiring…. and this is so well delivered…
“For in wait time does not fly, for in wait we give away the zeal to try.”
Thank you so much Shefali
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Nice post.I guess longing and doing done in equal measure is a pleasurable thing.
Anytime you tip off the balance it sure will take you for a ride.Good thought, Shantanu
Haha. Thank you Megha ππΈ
My pleasure.I’ll cut down on the longing part from today
Lol good for you
Beautiful again… Your Vocabulary isβ… That’s why I see a pure artist in you…You just know how to put correct words in correct place….
Thank you so much Deepanwita. I appreciate your kind words πΈ