Have you seen the birds chirping with no purpose,
Hopping from tree to tree like free souls?
Or looked up in the sky with spiral eyes,
Forming imaginary shapes through the array of clouds.
Have you lately sungย at the top of your voice,
Elated as if you have conquered the world?
Thatโs how I feel every time we bond,
Stating that you are in my thoughts is an understatement,
for you define my very worthย
Copyright ยฉ Shantanu Baruah
Beautifully written ๐
Thank you so much for your kind words
You’re welcome ๐
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Very beautiful!
Thank you so much for your kind words
Felt every emotion you wanted to convey. Loved first four lines and the last one, yes they really do added the meaning to it. Loved this piece of yours.โคโค๐๐
Magnificent writing๐
How many more times are you going to inspire and gratify me with beautiful words, Sir? ๐
“you define my very worth”
That speaks volumes to me !
I’m just spellbound on the way you make every word so beautiful !
Wonderful.
Thank you Adithya
Thank you so much. I truly appreciate your kind words ๐ธ
Thank you so much Sameera
Thank you so much Yusuf. Appreciate your kind comment ๐ธ
Pleasure was all mineโคโค๐๐
Thank you again for your kindness ๐ธ
“Spiral eyes” Nice! Great job on this.
Thank you so much
How beautiful is thisโค
And yes I do all of that when I go for walks๐คฆโโ๏ธ
Thank you Yasmin. And you are a good soul โค๏ธ
And so are youโค
Thank you ๐๐ธ
i can visualize this………….just perfect!
Thank you so much Wendi
truly my pleasure………..
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beautiful photograph, beautiful words
Thank you Atifa. ๐๐ค
Loved it!๐
Thank you so much Fatima ๐ธ
Its my pleasure !
Thank you
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Lovelyโค
Thank you so much โค๏ธ
The whole piece is so charming! Love The Way You concluded it. Brilliant and beautiful
Thank you so much Sona ๐ธ
Beautiful piece!
Thank you Warren
Yes how when the mind connects and heart lingers on for the beautiful feeling called love, our senses find beauty seeded everywhere.
You always say it so beautifully. Thank you
Thanks Shantanu.
My pleasure
Wonderful! ๐ค
Thank you so much Mohika
Expression of a happy heart……as beautiful as ever.
Thanks you Sakshi. Your comments are precious. ๐ธ
You are welcome and it’s a pleasure to read you.
The feeling is mutual. I love reading your work too
M glad it is ๐๐. Although I am a new bee… I am grateful for the support and appreciation.
Well, you are humble. And that is a good thing ๐
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I can feel the joy of this poem. Beautiful. -Jill
Thank you so much for your kind comment Jill
You are most welcome.
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