I can see a storm bellowing quietly behind those intense eyes,
The smirk with many meaning and different shades of forbidden lies,
The restless soul trying hard to anchor in past yore,
Countless thoughts keeping her awake behind that trap door.
Copyright Β© Shantanu Baruah
Beautiful lines. π
She wishes , someone to show her the shore. πΈ ( Tried)
She wishes someone to show her the shore ,
Before her thoughts could drown her more . π
With such love why would you like to come to shore – if I am I will enjoy the perilous ride – draped in love ππ
Oh. I love the lines see that is the problem debating with a poet. They kill you with words π
Haha ! Your lines are so beautiful . I was just adding perspective . I don’t know if I did justice . π
You absolutely did And I loved it
Thankyou! π
keen observation.
Thanks Megha
Nicely captured!
Thank you