An unfinished story,
Many unmet desire,
The ditched meet-up,
Some unsettled mire.
And with a broken soul,
We parted.
Copyright Β© Shantanu Baruah
An unfinished story,
Many unmet desire,
The ditched meet-up,
Some unsettled mire.
And with a broken soul,
We parted.
Copyright Β© Shantanu Baruah
I feel pain in your words…if that’s the case – your writing fully justify your state!
This poem is filled with longing. Beautiful. -Jill
Thank you so much, Jill.
Thanks so much – appreciate your kind words
Be strong. Have faith. Believe. If you really believe , things happen. And then there is always ‘hope’
Thank you so much, Yassy π
Always welcome ππ
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maybe the universe will align all it can to bring you back together again. however for the moment, i am mourning this loss with you. blessings.π
Thank you, Atifa. Appreciate your kind words.
Poignantly written..
Thank you, Graci. This one is very close to my heart.
oh dear…so true and so poignant..every time he leaves he takes away a piece of me.Nicely penned, Shantanu.
Thank you so much, Megha. Appreciate your beautiful comment
That’s why it pierces through the reader’s heart. Because it’s coming from deep within you..
Thank you, Graci. You said it beautifully π
You’re welcome Shantanu π
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A token of trying to add on to it…forgive if wrongly said.
An unfinished story,
Many unmet desire.
The ditched meet-up,
Some unsettled mire.
And with a broken soul,
We parted…to meet again.
With new pipe dream,
To be in the midst of new rapport…..scream.
Never to be parted again,
None to be departed again,
An unfinished story,
With the acceptance of loves’ glory.
πβ€….# Long Live Love For All#
Thanks for adding. You sure want it to end happily ever after π
Yes indeed.
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