Drifting

Gradually but slowly,
one tiny step at a time,
like the sand on the banks of a river
deposited over time,
they drifted and fell apart
unsure when the narrow crevices,
and tiny fissures
had become so wide and gaping
that love has fallen off in some deep ravine

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15 thoughts on “Drifting”

  1. I can actually feel the sand beneath my feet such is the power of your words.Loves and goes slowly,a bitter truth.
    My favorite line is “that love has fallen off in some deep ravine”

  2. Outstanding piece, Shantanu! I’ve been trying to find words to say how much I like it but I fail! Beautifully penned!! I really love this one!

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