Spreading her wings
like an angelic cherub
belonging to some Corinthian time
from a distant past
she soared
spreading some perilous smiles
leaving her whiff for other’s surprise
her candor was her signature
alas! people assumed
she wasn’t real but some disguise
Copyright © Shantanu Baruah
Ufff..last two lines..just kills it everytime!!😍
Thank you so much Jay 😇
Perhaps those wings took a lifetime to earn? Hence .. each feather to precious to have them so easily plucked away by the real disguise we all know as ” Behind a smile lies a crooked mile” Absolutely Beautifully written in a style all your own! Observance, you wear it well.
A quote I wrote that is on my poetry blog ” Asumptions are a fool’s paradise”.
Thank you so much Myth for adding on to my prose so beautifully. And I loved your quote. 🦋😇
Very welcome. Shantanu Baruha, you wear your travels, and life experiences well.
Wisdom inks your feathered pen.
Your writing opens the door to metaphors which lead to many directions for your readers to go.
Embracing the world in which you live is so rewarding! People are beautiful everywhere! With so much to share when given a chance. Happy travels!🛫🛳️🚗🚲
Wow your comments are always so beautiful. You never miss a chance to encourage me – thanks a lot for that. You ur self are beautiful hence you Always see beautiful. Just got back today from my trip to India. Thanks 😊😇🤗
We are all so very beautiful! We just fail to see. And spend so much wasted time wanting what matters less. I support your writing for the honesty it withholds! A Humble Thank you for a compliment we all deserve.
Isn’t it wonderful to achieve your dreams!?🤗
Absolutely. And I am glad we connected. I enjoy reading your amazing view point and clean thought. 😇🤗🌸🦋
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